Sunday, April 3, 2011

My BEST 2009 Poem!

Sunshine has turned to darkness,
The sun has turned away,
ever since Rover and Jessie had died,
there is no time to play.

My love has turned to horror,
The flowers smell like mouldy cheese,
ever since my dogs has died,
there is no place to be......


  1. Wow, this is a great poem Ala!
    You have allowed me to really understand your feelings through your choice of vocabulary.
    Keep up the great writing.

    Miss G :-)

  2. Hi Mis G,

    Thank you very much for leaving a comment on my blog. I think that this poem is good too! Thats why I did it! I agree with everything that you had left in your comment! Once again thank you for leaving a comment on my blog post. I hope that you leave me more comments on my blog posts and that you would give me good feed back on how I could improve!

    Yours Truly, Ala