Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Striking That Pose!!!

Walking down the red carpet shining like a star,
looking out of the sun light seeing my limo isn't that far.
Puffy material etching my knees,
and also thinking about my fees.


  1. LOL! I really like this one Ala! Well done.
    Mrs Burt

  2. Ala what a wonderful amount of descriptive words that you've managed to pack into such a small space. Great, wonderful stuff.
    In such a small space you've been really clever in the words that you've used.
    Mr Webb, Room 8, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.

  3. I like this one too Ala. I think you have done a really good job.
    I really like the line "Puffy material etching my knees". I bet that material is really scratchy even though it does look lovely.
    Ms Squires